$1.15 per 1,000 words
Comprehensive manuscript feedback from both a reader's and writer's perspective to help elevate your story.
Reading of the entire manuscript, providing an honest and in-depth critique. My feedback focuses on how the story reads from both a reader's and a writer's perspective—what engages me, what confuses me, and what I believe can be improved.
A detailed report that covers:
Their voices within the narrative, how compelling/realistic they are, how their motivations land, and whether their relationships and dynamics feel authentic.
Where they shine, where development feels rushed or unclear, and how effectively their journeys progress.
An analysis of flow, tension, sense of progress, plot clarity, beats, and overall enjoyment.
Covering characters' emotions/thoughts, exposition, setting, and action.
Inconsistencies in POV, chapter/scene breaks, transitions, story structure, and any other particularities that belong in the narrative.
Actionable ideas on how to enhance the narrative, highlight character moments, improve pacing and clarity, and so on.
Analysis of worldbuilding elements, providing clear and comprehensive thoughts and also giving suggestions and insights regarding improvements, on three aspects:
How organic and fluid the exposition feels within the narrative, and how well it connects and enhances the narrative and character arcs.
Where the worldbuilding feels confusing, consistent, or disconnected, and whether it possesses a solid structure for future installments/lore.
How vivid, immersive, and rich the world feels regarding magic systems, cultures, politics, and overall lore.
Availability to address any specific questions or concerns, as well as brainstorming ideas after the order is completed.
Enhance your feedback with specialized deep-dive reports
In case you wish to publish your work, please consider hiring a professional editor later on, as these steps are crucial for a high-quality published novel.
Genres in emphasis are where I excel most
*Unless combined with SFF settings/plot.
Real feedback from authors who've worked with me
“Winter exceeded expectations. I appreciate the care and respect given in their critiques and comments. Their critiques were constructive and thoughtful. They posed questions that I hadn't even considered and provided amazing feedback. They were also more than willing to answer any clarifying questions and to share their thoughts on possible directions. The insight provided is going to tremendously help me improve my story. I feel energized and optimistic from Winter's input. I liked my story before but after these edits, it's going to be on a whole new level.”
tsulli4
United States
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